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Poston Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:29 pm

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Poston Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:58 pm

i really liked this.
the blend of colors and layers is very very good IMO
i do have a tech remark, small one. it feels the horizon is a little twisted.... i feel that correctin the building roof to be straight will make it better. even though the mountains go in a slent way down, the roof itself is the eye anchor. so i feel it has to be straight to make the entire photo to be straight.

other than that, composition is great, the clouds contribute to the athmosphere.
i enjoyed it
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Poston Fri Feb 05, 2010 10:27 pm

it makes me think of a painture. you get a strange feel of depth in this picture. I think this is a really nice landscape.
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Poston Fri Feb 05, 2010 10:36 pm

Excellent light, colours and compo, and a fantastic landscape. Really a very impressive one for me...
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Poston Sat Feb 06, 2010 7:32 am

Lovely light and colours but maybe too much sky and rock for me. Did you use any filters for the shot?
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Poston Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:04 pm

As mentioned the roof edge should be made horizontal. For the rest this is a fantastic shot. Great composition, wonderful colors.
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Poston Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:55 pm

Very interesting photo and work, the hdr effect is bit strong, but gives great effect :-)
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Poston Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:28 pm

Thanks all .. Sono molto felice per le sue considerazioni.
The roof and slightly tilted, it is true.
I used for this photo pol + ND 8...
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Poston Sat Feb 06, 2010 5:45 pm

Hi,

The play with lights and shadows is successful as is the light :wink:
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Poston Sun Feb 07, 2010 8:56 am

Love this picture well done.
One point to mention is maybe it is not always about horizontals as others have mentioned when it comes to buildings. Sometimes its the verticals that make more of a difference to how things appear in buildings particularly with wide lens.
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Poston Mon Feb 08, 2010 3:52 pm

Excellent!!! Have you ever been told you live in a beautiful corner of the world?...
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Poston Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:04 pm

Thanks all... :) Jiri thanks very much.
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Poston Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:19 pm

Amazing composition my friend, loved it :)
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Poston Tue Mar 02, 2010 11:41 am

Congratulations Stefano! This photo has been chosen as "Landscapes" Photo of the week !
respirándonos, miramos la campiña que adormece el sol,
los valles y los bosques y la humilde flor,
las islas navegando por la soledad...
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Poston Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:21 pm

Congrats Stefano an amazing image!
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